Impromptu and cowardly
Perhaps it came to teach me that, even after so much walking, I knew nothing.
But who really knows something at all?
I hear that litany that tells me «give it up»
take charge of your life but give it up
take charge of your life but give it up
take charge of your life but give it up
take charge of your life but give it up
take charge of your life but give it up
----------------------------------------------------------> how to do that?
Following the path of hows and whys
I lost my little compass
No matter how hard I kick the ground
there, where the crack is,
no flower is born
It's simple
I see unearthly shadows
petals falling
on a dry and cracked
for where my demons escape.
It's all right, girl
I cast off the broken hearts
I set them free to sink in their misery
I bind to myself
as if it were my destiny to scan the horizon
or the Pleiades <----------------------------------------------------------
as if the half of my life had sunk into the sea.
Memories are fading
in a simmering sauce.
As much as my intuition speaks
there are days...
unbearable
they're just days when I'd tie my feet to the wind
to shake me
like a balloon when it deflates
(it's the edges)(it's the blows)
that will make me wake up.
Meanwhile, life goes on
I am nothing
I am nobody
I am nothing.
I'll cry like a damned fool
by the rough sea
with the blue-grey sky as a mirror
and then the rainbow will be born.
Let me be cowardly, but straight.
Let me in this impromptu where borders and common sense are blurred.
To be divine, perhaps it's not my place.
Let me...
🌿
...
just a poetic exercise
sitting
next to an old storage container.
Original content by @nanixxx. All rights reserved ©, 2024.
Mujer, qué maravilla!! No sé sé que te quedó mejor: el poema o las fotografías!! Creo que me quedo con todo: hasta con el juego que hiciste en la estructura del texto. Te cuento un secreto? Recuerdo que yo aprendí a utilizar el comando, para omitir el texto traducido, por ti. Una vez lo comentaste en el discord de La-colmena y desde allí lo hago. Me encanta aprender de la gente. Gracias por dejarme que aprenda de ti. Abrazos, @nanixxx
Hola, @nancybriti1. Gracias 😇. ¿Cómo estás? Ah, y yo no puse el texto en español. Te digo un secreto: A veces me da pereza después de escribir, traducir editar las fotos, corregir... y nunca queda bien del todo... 😂
Un abrazo inmenso desde este otro lado del mundo (o no sé si seguimos en el mundo)
I would love to one day lose control of my life, but ..... only when I learn to trust the right person to hand over that helm...sometimes it gets tiring to fight and the desire to float builds up.
That is a unique and precious moment, and yes, you are also divine, in your own unique and special way.
🌻
Your text is a very well designed work of art.
No, to take charge of your life is to give up control, and you can only put that in your hands. That is, whatever has to happen, happens in divine time. 😅
Un poco de juego de palabras. 😁 No puedes darle el timón de tu vida a nadie más que a ti misma. Y no eres una carga agotadora, las cargas son las que constantemente llevamos sin razón. Suelta y confía... entonces flotarás.
(ah, y gracias, @adaluna1973 🤗)
El próximo ejercicio literario tendrá que ser la contraparte de este. It's just that there are days... weird and unbearable 😇
All women are strange and unbearable, for moments that should be shorter......
It is difficult to understand some puns because they are interpreted in different ways....
...I'll stick with that: ....let go and trust... then you will float.👍🏼
Literary exercise? When, how and where...😁
And post design classes? You have a lot to teach us @nanixxx
🤣😯😅 Vamos, vamos, no te hagas que tú escribes lindooo
I respect the people who inspire me with emotions and lyrics very much.
Here at Hive I have three, you are one of them, did I tell you already?
Good night friend.
(no sabía) 😀
Descansa. Buenas noches. 👋
Espectacular tanto el ejercicio poético como las fotografías, tu óptica es genial, sé que te lo digo mucho. Saludos, @nanixxx un abrazo 💙.
¡Gracias! Es bueno saber que mi mensaje es apreciado pues sólo soy una aprendiz... eterna. Aprendo también de ti y de todas las personas que de una forma u otra llegan a mi vida.
Un abrazo. Espero que estés teniendo un lindo día.
That's different! rust ! very photogenic
Things come up... I would say unexpectedly, but, yes, it was a bit like that because I went out to look for a cow that I had seen tied up outside my house and I didn't see it. Then I looked at the rusty container that is mine. It's next to my house. I keep my building materials and tools there. It said to me: take pictures of me girl! 😃
LOL,
building materials and tools!!! is there no end to your talents
Ah, yes, my house is half built. I don't know if I'll ever finish it. I hope so.
fingers crossed
To be in control of your life you have to let go and not have any control.... seems like a contradiction but we don't really control anything... we just let the other person work and give them full trust.
The photos speak of the state of mind... and they match perfectly with the text, wonderful.
Thank you, it is just as you say. We must be patient and not despair. Yesterday I was a bit worried about my sister. There was a strong hurricane passing through Florida... I was thinking that there are days when patience does not accompany me so much... and I despair a lot... But we must be strong, avecilla. There are many tests that the Universe puts us through.
ESo nos pasa a todos, somos humanos, cuando te pase, pedile a tu doble la calma necesaria y decile: actualiza para mi el mejor futuro potencial.🤗
I can say little about poetry, I envy the poetesses. Of the photos, which are magnificent. I enjoyed them very much. I love those shadows, those textures,
Y... Good morning ☕.
Good morning 😁, o ya no sé... No tengo noción del tiempo. Today confidence returned to me.
Welcome confidence 😃, but don't run away again.😡
I think it can be a good evening!! 😅
🤣 me pides algo difícil, although I notice that lately these episodes last much less time.
give me a hint!
A big hug.
I'm late... I have a few days without a horario... I'll give you a hint... I don't know if it's worth it.
Hug yourself tight and say something nice to yourself, I think it's a good way to start a nice evening.
I think it is worth it.
Gracias.
I do, though I may be crazy 🙃
No, no lo estás.
Quizás si 😂. Hasta mañana!! 👋
¡Que no!, enraizar. I've had a song stuck in my head since yesterday, about roots. And on the other hand I had some dreams... estaba pensando en ellos ahora. But someone told me yesterday, no alguien a quien conozco, sino alguien que suelo escuchar, that what dreams do is to put things in their place, to help to heal.
¡Hasta mañana!
Eso es lo que hacen....
I love the details and contrasts you captured in these images, I have always said from the simple comes out the harmonious and aesthetic. Greetings !
!discovery 35
Yes, sometimes when I have a lot of stuck thoughts, I just try to take pictures of simple things. I'm glad you like my work.
Thanks!
This post was shared and voted inside the discord by the curators team of discovery-it
Join our Community and follow our Curation Trail
Discovery-it is also a Witness, vote for us here
Delegate to us for passive income. Check our 80% fee-back Program
🙌 thank you.
The poetic exercise is very beautiful, now let me invite you to the exercise of feathered evil, I assure you that you will feel very good 🦉
I really like the craziness of you two. Now in a little while I'm going to go learn how to make a witches hat. 😉
Wow!... You are an artist photographing close-up details... Great management of lights, textures and colors!... A work full of art and good visual taste!!!... And as if all this wasn't already something wonderful, you have accompanied it with your wonderful lines!... You are a talent @nanixxx friend!!!
!PIZZA
😅😇 Tengo que usar el tag #talentish?
Thank you very much, my friend, receiving these compliments from you encourages me to continue.
Yes!... Usted tiene lots of #talentish!!!! hehehe :))) Hugs my friend!!!...
Gracias, lo mismo le digo. Un gran abrazo de vuelta.
$PIZZA slices delivered:
@jlinaresp(6/15) tipped @nanixxx
Me encanto.. entonces nacerá el arcoíris🌈.... hermosas fotos, y tu ejercicio poético 👏👏👏👏🌻🦋🌈
Un arcoíris es una cosa genial de ver. Gracias @sucetmaga64.
Gracias @jlinaresp y @visualshots.
Nunca pensé que de ese contenedor viejo y oxidado pudieras sacar fotos tan bonitas. Y que inspirara en ti ese lindo poema. Bonita noche.🌌🥰
Te quiero mamani, gracias. Que descanses mejor esta noche, porque ayer sé que apenas dormiste.
Dejar escapar tus demonios y llora...ya saldrá el arcoiris, siempre lo hace. Lindo ejercicio poético. Oyeee, que fotogénico es ese contenedor!!🤭🤣. Un abrazo Amanda.
Qué cosa más grandeeee por tu vida santa y yo no le había hecho fotos a ese gran modelo. 😄
;) Abrazo Amandita.
I'm stopping by to say hello, so much beauty in your photographs.
It is a way to portray ugliness by giving it beauty, complementing it with your poem.
😇 Thank you so much, Eve.