"Rough Times, An Instant Change"

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No matter what you say
The mountains can't wait for you
And I can't seem to blame them
The seasons don't discriminate against my shoes

Every minute and every hour
On their own, they manage to bring me outer pain
I will never give in
But I'm resigned to joining the dark revolt

Because I know that the moment is right like I know that I am
Deep in my soul, a reminder just like thunder
That everything falls apart without a sense of fate

More and more people turning their backs
Everyone I know is gone, did they know about the storm?
We were warned about the danger so I won't feel shame

Have you ever seen a wildfire burning down a land
I'm surrounded by this mess of blackness
Feel the panic and it sears my heart

I'm on the move forcing myself to stay calm
No time to search for you in the dark
But let your spirit shine when times get rough
So I say there's a new dawn coming, I believe…

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More and more people turning their backs
Everyone I know is gone, did they know about the storm?

Why so relateable !LOL

there's a new dawn coming

Every downfall has a rise... There's a hope in this line. Amazing Lines.

!PIZZA

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I can't speak for everyone but I do have a share of this kind of experience. And in every bad experience, I think it's also fair to hope for good things to come as well.

Thanks for your feedback :)

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Such positivity is a way to live better life. Always have found some Good lessons and relateable moments in your poem. Keep sharing your thoughts and experiences!

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More and more people turning their backs
Everyone I know is gone, did they know about the storm?
We were warned about the danger so I won't feel shame

I really love this part

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Thank you for the feedback, it means a lot to me :)

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