Feeling you
Calm... I haven’t gone.
I’m still the river that flows into you,
so you may return whole and renewed
after each small death.
And I know you are the same for me.
I write this line with certainty
and repeat:
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love...
I’m feeling you,
and I believe you hear me
when I whisper it softly
at the faintest hint of doubt.
Perhaps the first solution is to whisper it,
again and again,
like a mantra.
So they don’t reach me
when silence echoes pain
and I’m like a small mouse
dying between metaphor and real life...
The truth is, the day before yesterday,
early in the morning,
I found a poor rodent, barely alive,
in a corner of my house.
My mother thinks it may have eaten poison somewhere.
But calm; being yours, I became more mine.
Later that night,
I was thinking of all the paths I took to arrive here,
to this today,
where danger constantly circles me
and makes me burst into tears
as I search for clues and papers to escape.
I was thinking of how much I miss you.
I was sitting on my terrace.
The house lights turned off by themselves.
I looked at the clock.
It was 11:11.
Being mine, I understood
that my world without you
is a ball of weariness,
and I can’t even string words together
to write this... poem?
Now I need calm here.
Do I hear you?
Do you murmur the same as I do
when you feel me trapped
between doubt and despair?
I love you, yes...
I said I would love you always,
no matter what happens...
and it’s true...
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Good morning. I’ve felt inspired to participate in the #Monomad Challenge with these images. I took them during my holiday at Varadero Beach.
Heartfelt thanks to the entire team of this wonderful Community for always welcoming me with such warmth over these three years on Hive.
😉
Original content by @nanixxx. All rights reserved ©, 2025.
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How beautiful (and yet how sad). The poem goes superbly with the pictures.
The sadness… perhaps it was the influence of the eclipse… ;) Thanks 😇.
A lovely poem b...
The bird would be wandering who this stalker is😂
Pffff...🤣 maybe. It’s got that slightly puzzled look, yes… could be.
Thank you.
Lindo poema 😍
Hola, ya veo que hiciste la tarea de poner foto de perfil y andas haciendo tus primeros comentarios. Bienvenida a Hive... espero por tu presentación.
Gracias.
Happy birthday!!!! Congratulations on three years here!!! And you're celebrating with some beautiful photos and a poem that's very much your own, excellent!! Happy three years!!
😌😊 Thank you, truly, thank you. You were the first to congratulate me (well, no... HiveBuzz almost always come first 🤣), and that means a lot to me. A hug, Avecilla.
No vale che! me salió la argentina jajaja yo soy una persona jajaja felicidades!!😃
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😘
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😁 me voy por fotografías a ver que exploro!!!
Pues lindo día y feliz comienzo de semana. 👋
Igual para vos!!🤗
¡Gracias!
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Wonderful mix between words and pictures 😊 HAPPY HIVE ANNIVERSARY 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Gracias Mavel. 😀 En tres meses celebrarás tu primer añito.
Fascinating your seagulls, and your dog paw prints in the sand, and your muses in your lines, floating... Happy #hivebirthday!...
I remember looking around to see if I could spot the dog somewhere, but clearly it must have passed through long before I arrived. That stretch of beach, by the hotel where I spent my holiday, was honestly so, so peaceful and quiet. I absolutely loved it.
Thank you so much @jlinaresp and Visualshots. 😄
Some very beautiful photographs, especially the penultimate one, which gives the impression that the bird is walking along happily. Excellent photographs and undoubtedly excellent inspiration for your writing!
It looks happy and walks with confidence. 🤓 Yes, I took my time selecting these photos. Thank you, @naitreart.
A poem from the soul and some photos that say more than a thousand words... 🌹
Happy HiveAnniversary, aunt Nani ❤️ I'll send some feathered friends to bring you a cake made by me 🎂🦉
😅 Thank you, I’ll be waiting for those feathered friends… 🤔 are they taking long? It’s 3:24 a.m. and they haven’t arrived with the cake. But it doesn’t matter, I enjoy celebrating my unbirthdays with cake too.
Jajaja... eres una preciosura. Te quiero buhito.
Son un poco lerdos para volar esos emplumados jaja de seguro llegaran para el mediodia 😂
Te quiero tia nani ❤️🦉
¡¡Feliz Hive Aniversario Amanda!! Que vengan muchos años más para ti en este lugar donde eres muy feliz. Lindo poema y lindas fotos 🥰. Un abrazo 🤗.
Gracias Amanda Flores de la Cocina poderosa. Espero que podamos celebrar muchos años más y que no nos falten las aventuras y las risas para compartir aquí. Abrazo de vuelta.
Por nada Amanda Bike observadora de Aves curiosa e intrépida 🤪
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Hello @nanixxx, happy third birthday... I love the last photo. You've written some powerful words, love can conquer all...
A big hug.
A big, huge hug is heading right back to you. You must’ve been awake for a while now. As for me, it seems I’ve fallen prey to insomnia this early morning 🙂, but I’ll be going back to sleep soon. Thank you. Love is the greatest and most beautiful force; it unites and it saves.
There is a lot of passion behind every line. Loved the poem and the pictures @nanixxx. Greetings and nice evening ☺️
Good night… thank you so much for your kind words and warm wishes. 🤗
Thank you so much @brumest and Qurator. ✨
Thank you for sharing both your emotions and the beauty you captured in Varadero Beach. Three years in this community and your presence continues to shine with warmth and sincerity.💕
😊 Hi, @gretelarmfeg,
Thank you so much for this lovely comment... I wouldn't know how to be any other way. Greetings from Havana.
You’re most welcome!💛Greetings back to you from here.🤗💕
me encanta come you formatted esta "...poema?" con la grande como la poesia y la paquennyyyya (sorry, I still don't know how to type accentos con mi pinche laptop americano ☕️) como los reflecciones personales
y las fotos tambien bonitas
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Gracias. Me da alegría que te guste mi... esto... que es un desahogo.