RE: At Night if I Allow – New Poetry
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I really like the imagery that you have in this section and the question you pose.
When the sun rises
does it push out the dark?
Or does the dark merely exit
allowing
presence to fill
absence
On the river after the dark
has gone, for awhile,
the grebe plumbs the depths
It interacts very nicely with the way you finish the poem and sort of play with the reader.
Do you think I will
conclude drawing for you
some colorful truth?
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Thank you!